In this bonus mini-episode, Rachael Herron talks about what she’s found to be the best platform-building tools for writers.
Also covered:
- Turning your book into a screenplay
- What if your book just isn’t as strong as you’d like yet
- How do you handle not being historically accurate?
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Transcript:
Rachael Herron: [00:00:00] Welcome to “How do you Write?” I’m your host, Rachael Herron. On this podcast, I talk to authors about how they write, what their process is and how their lives fit together. I’ll keep each episode short so you can get back to writing.
[00:00:16] Well, Hello writers! Welcome to episode #249 of “How do you Write?” I’m Rachael Herron. Thrilled you’re here with me today on this mini bonus episode, which I’m just going to try to do more of. If you are a Patron of mine at the $5 or up level a month, not only do you get all the essays that I write, and right now I’m writing about, moving, and fear, and courage, and how both of those things feel in the body, but you get to have me as your mini coach and you get to ask me any questions. I’m finishing up all the questions right here. Got a couple of questions and then it will have no more. So you mini coaching clients, please send me some and I’ll be doing more of these videos, which I really, really love to do. [00:01:07] So, right now, just a little catch up. I am doing this right after I filmed the last episode. So I’m still in Idaho as we speak. Although when you get this, I will be one day away from leaving the United States of America and moving to New Zealand. We leave tomorrow as this is released. So perhaps when you listening to it on crying on an airplane, somewhere over the Pacific. Anything is possible. I have reached a really deep level of happiness though, and acceptance and excitement about this. Finally, the fear is almost gone. I’m sure there will be more of it in the days to come, but, we’ve done all the things we’ve sold the house, we’ve sold the cars, everything we own is in suitcases. And now all we have to do is live and follow our noses to where they feel like going. And that’s super exciting and I’m just tremendously overwhelmed by this feeling of anticipation and also deep happiness in the moment which is the most important thing. I’m not trying to get anywhere. Yes, we are going to New Zealand, but I don’t have an idea of what that’s going to look like or what it needs to be. [00:02:21] It is just going to be what it should be. And what matters is this moment sitting in this particular co-working space in Idaho and how it’s a little bit hot in here and a little bit muggy, which is impossible in place. I don’t know how that’s happening. But I know that after I record this, when I go home tonight, we’re going to have Mexican food. And at this moment I really am enjoying the width and the height of this desk that I’m sitting at it’s really, really good, fits my body. I’m enjoying the incredible speed of the internet. That’s what’s going on for now. And it’s good. So, just for one second, why don’t you take a moment to think about where you are? How does your body feel? How’s your back feel? How does your brain feel as I’m talking to you? What’s going on in this very minute, what can you see? What can you taste? What is good right now? What is difficult right now, what hurts? Acknowledge that, I’m going deep and really, I meant to just answer questions. [00:03:26] So, but do take a minute to maybe think about what you are glad of in this moment and it doesn’t have to be just good things. You can be glad about hard things too. So, I am glad that I’m with you here in this moment, in a very cool kind of time, travel way and all right, let’s jump into the questions. We can go less metaphysical and into the nitty gritty of writing. [00:03:52] Okay, so this first question, and the second question are from Maggie. How rude my cell phone is still on, I’m turning that off. Okay. All right. She says I’m in the process of drafting my first complete novel, where the romance between the two central characters is both of the theme and the main story I want to tell. I have a solid premise and I know my characters inside and out. Still, I’ve struggled to develop the finer points of my plot in a way that supports my character’s development while also keeping the story moving in an interesting and satisfying way. My concern is that my plot devices will feel forced and inadequate. Do you have any advice on crafting a story driven plot without over complicating the heart of the story? And then it goes on to ask a different question. I want to answer this one first. [00:04:43] So, you’re in the process of drafting your first complete novel of this particular book. And I would just like to reassure you and everyone listening that the finer points of your plot will be awkward and weird and wrong and flat and strange, you want them to move in an interesting and satisfying way. They will not, they will move in a dull, boring and completely unsatisfying way. That’s a first draft’s job. It’s also sometimes even a second draft’s job and the more we get comfortable with allowing our books to really just suck the big one. The closer we get to being able to create books that satisfy us completely, that satisfy every single thing that we want them to do. First, they have to be written wrong. And, that is a truth that is just gonna continue to be a truth for the rest of our lives as writers. So it’s kind of liberating, isn’t it? In a first draft or sometimes even a second draft, what we do in the book is just, it just feels bad. It just feels wrong because said with love, it is it’s not good enough yet, but you can’t make it good enough until the book is written. There’s no way, right, there are a few exceptions to this. I’ve known like I, and I’ve told- I’ve said this before, I have known four or five professional writers with, you know, 30 or 40 books under their belts who go through the book and they make the book good as they go. That is less than 1% of the writers that I know. The rest of us cannot make chapter six. Good. And then go on to chapter seven, we just write chapter six and it’s bad, and it is not interesting and it is clumsy and wrong. [00:06:44] And then we go on to chapter seven and we have to do it that way. Ninety nine point- I’m going to say 99.3% of writers have to do it that way. If you think you’re not that kind of writer, and maybe this is not you, I’m not talking to you because I know you and you’re not this kind of writer, but if you think you are the writer who has to get it right before moving forward, that is only your method if you are regularly completing good books that you are proud of, if you are not, and you think that that is your method. That’s not true. You’re wrong. Your method is to write a crappy first draft and get to the end and then revise it just like everybody else. The only way that you know, that is your method, that perfectionist method of making a chapter good and then moving on to the next one and then making that good and then moving onto the next chapter is if you are regularly completing good books. So that is a really useful test to see if you are in that .7% of people who can do that, are you doing it? Then that’s you, if you’re not doing it, then you’re just like the rest of us. [00:07:44] So going back to Maggie and her question, the next part of that is my novel is loosely inspired by sensitive and important events in history. However, my goal and vision is not to write historical fiction. What are your thoughts on how to be sensitive to historical themes without needing to make sure I’m being historically accurate in my representation of the events? So this is great. I think a lot of writers struggle with this because history is important. It is important, it’s how we got here. History it’s how I got here, it’s how you got where you are, history matters and you mentioned the word sensitive, which means that these are probably historical events that perhaps have two different sides as most historical events do. And what I like to recommend when writing historical events is to hold them with a loose hand, move stuff around. If you want to, there are some writers who really, really, really want to be historical writers and getting the history in the right place. On the right day, at the right time of day with the right weather is going to be very important to them. [00:08:55] And that is perfectly fine. However, you’re currently saying your goal is not to be a historical writer is to tell this story of these characters. So hold it loosely. If you need to move stuff around, allow yourself to do so. And then, before the book is published you just get to put in that magic line at the beginning of the book that, or at the end of the book that says some historical events have been moved or changed in order to suit my story. There. You’re in the clear, the average reader who doesn’t know much about these events will be learning from your events even if you have changed some things, they’re learning deep lessons from what you are showing them and the avid historical reader, who knows every single thing about this particular battle and where it occurred and who died first, who died second, who won, who lost? They will be comforted by the sentence that says, I know the history and I’m choosing to change it, to suit my story. And you get to do that. You are allowed. And in fact, I encourage you to do that because I think that’s really fun. [00:10:01] All right. Next question of all the different methods you have tried newsletter, social media, promotions, podcasting, et cetera, which one has been the best for building your platform/finding your specific readers/fans? What in the early years of your writing career, pre-published, to a few books published, do you wish you had done more of, or less of? Okay, so I have two answers for this because I have two different basis of readers. I have the writer base, people who come to me to hear podcasts like this, to talk about writing, to talk about how to complete books and how to get out of their own damn way and get their work done. So that has a particular niche of people. The best thing that I have done in finding them is podcasting reliably for more than five years now. This is episode 249 and that’s awesome. That’s a lot of freaking podcasts for, I dunno, three or four years. I did the Writer’s Well podcast with J. Thorn that also increased my visibility as a teacher of writing. Probably another thing I did that really got me to know a lot of people was teaching both at Stanford and Berkeley and having that kind of word of mouth. And that’s how writers have found me as a person to listen to and ask questions of. So podcasting is probably my primary purpose for that, but if you, but for my readers, for finding readers of my fiction and of my memoir that I write, this was such a good question. [00:11:44] What I wish I had focused on earlier is the thing. I always encourage everyone to focus on as early in their careers as they can. I wish I had been building my mailing list as early as possible. And I was to a certain extent, I did have a mailing list that readers could join before my first book came out and I was able to do that because I was a regular and reliable blogger. I started blogging in 2002, so almost 20 years now. And I had a quite large readership on the blog. So I was able to move those readers over onto my email newsletter list for the books that I write. And a lot of those people liked the books that I wrote. So they came along with me on that newsletter experience. However, I didn’t do a great job of catching the people who read the first few books and in part that is because those books were traditionally published. And at the end of a traditionally published book, those were from Harper Collins, my first five or so books were Harper Collins. And at the end of the book, they say, please sign up to follow Rachael Herron. And then they give you the Harper Collins website to follow Rachael Herron’s books at Harper Collins. I didn’t get any of those email addresses. It’s hard to do if you’re traditionally published because the publisher wants those email addresses too. They know how valuable they are, but set up a phone and I’ll say it again. The most valuable thing you can do as a writer is to get those email addresses for yourself. Not Facebook, not Twitter, not Instagram, not TikTok, getting followers on that is fine. [00:13:24] If you love doing that, great. But the only thing you own, you really own that is yours are those opt in newsletter subscribers never, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever put anyone under newsletter, even if they’re your best friend without asking. That’s just something that I will always, always say, if you and I have been friends forever, don’t put me on your email newsletter without asking me if you ask me, I will say yes, if you don’t ask me suddenly we are not friends anymore. And I will send your email to spam and that’s just not good. I mean, that is just one of those things that everyone hates. So you want opt in newsletter subscribers. People who have said I like you. And I am choosing to ask to continue to hear more about you. That is the number one most important thing to have. [00:14:18] I think number two, most important thing to have is just a place on the internet where you can be found. You own your own website. So that is the most, that’s the safest place to have. If you are a blogger and like blogging, do that. That’s a great way to go because then your voice is out there and people are finding you organically through search engine optimization, talking about the things you’re writing about, and then they have an option to follow you and people do. That’s the weird thing is people sign up for newsletters, but that’s true of me too. When I find something, a voice that I like, the first thing I do is I sign up for their newsletter. Often I unsubscribed after a while because either they aren’t who I wanted them to be or what I thought they were going to be. But I give a lot of newsletters, a try and certain newsletters I just absolutely love and don’t ever want to be off of, and you want to be that person and you want to be find-able. However, I will say about blogging. You do not have to blog at all. Only blog if it is something that you are passionate about doing and know that if you’re starting a blog, it’s going to be probably years before you gain traction and a large readership. So again, only do it if you love doing it. [00:15:30] Otherwise my take on social media. It’s changed a little bit. I’ve always said that you don’t have to build up any kind of social media following before your books come out because publishers would love it if you had a Kim Kardashian following, but they don’t expect you to. However, that’s changed recently to say that I don’t think you have to have a lot of followers, period, but you should be visible on the major platforms. You should be find-able and you should not be an asshole. Publishers are going to check. Agents are going to check. They are going to search for you on Instagram, Facebook, maybe Twitter. And if they find that you’re out there trolling or saying negative things to other people, they will immediately ignore you. They will send your email to delete. They don’t want to work for the person like that. They also want to see you out there interacting kindly with other people, maybe with writers, maybe with readers, maybe with just your friends that you went to high school with. Be visible on at least one platform perhaps. [00:16:32] And you don’t have to do a lot. And again, only do what you like. I hate Facebook. I’m barely there, but I have set up my Instagram. I like Instagram. I have set up my Instagram to send my pictures to Facebook. So it looks like I’m there. It’s a lie. I’m not, I just went in the other day and found comments from someone from February 2020 in my like, messages box. I barely know how to get to my messages box. So, you don’t have to be good at it by any stretch of the imagination, but, be at least one place. It’s what I would recommend and be the place that you like to be. I’m on TikTok now, because I love TikTok. It’s really fun. Am I trying to build up a following? I am not. I am trying to kind of make a record for myself and make videos for myself that have memories, especially about this whole move. You can follow me at TikTok if you want to. I’m really not interesting compared to all the people that I follow, but that’s fun for me so I allow myself to be there. [00:17:28] But overall to answer your question, get the newsletter list going as soon as possible. Have you ever, okay. And then, let’s see. Have you ever tried turning one of your books into a screenplay and having your agent tried to sell the movie rights? If so, what does that process look like? If not, what book of yours would you most like to see as a movie? Okay. This is such a fun question. I have never tried turning a screenplay, writing a screenplay from one of my books. I probably never will. That is a particular skill set that I do not choose to devote my time to, I have written a screenplay in the past. It was really fun. It was a great experience. I did it with a friend who was actually in the film industry. Never went anywhere. It was, but it was a really fun exercise. But what is more frequently done because most screens are never seen, let alone picked up. What happens is that you get a film agent usually through your own agent, and then they try to shop your book around. And if your book gets picked up or often by somebody, then the production company will hire a screenwriter to write your book. And that is the way I would prefer it to happen. I did have a film agent for Stolen Things and she was unable to sell it. Although we had some really, really close calls and close bites to options and that’s generally how it’s done. A film agent will take your project around. It is very hard to get a film agent. They are not like literary agents. Literary agents, you can just look up on agentcrew.com and send them career letters, film agents keep their information offline, and it really is an industry in which you have to know someone to get the information of a film agent. Which is why it usually goes through your own agent to have that happen. [00:19:14] So right now we’re crossing our fingers for Hush Little Baby. There is a film agent interested in it who knows if that one will pick it up. The film agent that I had for my last book did not. I don’t think we gave her the option. I think my agent did not give her the option to pick up Hush Little Baby, because we weren’t really impressed with the job that she did. And my agent is in charge of that. And I give that control to her. She makes those decisions because I don’t want to, but in answer to your question, what would I like to see made into a film? I have two in mind, Pack Up the Moon, which will always be one of my favorite books that I’ve ever written, and also Hush Little Baby, the most recent book, because it’s super, super action-oriented and intense and tense and all of those thrilling aspects that I think it would be good on the big screen. I think it would be a little gory, but that’s fun. So that is what I would love to see as a movie right now. [00:20:12] Okay, thank you, Maggie for those questions and this last one is from Donna. It is a comment, not a question. She didn’t send it to me as a question, but it is something that I just wanted to relay because this worked for her. She said, she is a 90 Days to Done previous student of mine. And she says since 90 days, I’ve lost that love and feeling and was getting down. This week I set up right track again as with an easy target. And my Pomodoro is 30 minutes. It absolutely works when you’re too overwhelmed, anxious, depressed, paralyzed, whatever to write. Thank you. So Write Track is just a free, if you Google Write Track, write, as in writing, is a free writing tracker that I actually really like, and you can set low goals, high goals, whatever they are, you can, I enjoy using it. And I’ve been talking a lot about the Pomodoro method recently because I’ve been needing it myself. [00:21:08] And it does work. You make yourself write for a very short amount of time or not even write, to sit with your butt in the chair and look at your writing and make some notes about what you want to do next for a small amount of time. And guess what, those small amounts of time add up to books, novels, essays, memoirs, poems, almost no one than, I mean almost no one sits down with eight hours and writes beautiful prose for that time. [00:21:41] We all do it in 15, 20, 30, maybe 45 minute bursts of time. And then our brains freeze. And we look at our phones, go to the bathroom, get some more coffee, consider never, ever returning to words again. And then we sit down and we do another 25 minutes and that’s all it takes. So Donna, I just wanted to thank you for saying that the Pomodoros work or whatever way you want to get yourself to the page where a very short amount of time in which you write frustratingly, terrible sentences that eventually add up to something that you can revise. And that adds up to something that you can take out into the world. Give to other people to read. No, you will not give it to, you will sell it to them. So, yes, I think that is all the questions that is all I wanted to say today. By the time you hear this, I’ll be on my way to New Zealand. And thank you for being here. [00:22:29] Thank you for your writing. You’re the only person you can write your book. And I want you to tell me about it and where I can buy it when it is out. And I really mean that. Okay, my darlings, happy writing to you. I’ll see you on the other side of the world.Thanks so much for joining me on this episode of “How do you Write?” You can reach me on Twitter, twitter.com/RachaelHerron, or at my website, www.rachaelherron.com, you can also support me on Patreon and get essays on living your creative life for as little as a buck an essay at www.patreon.com/rachael spelled R, A, C, H, A, E, L and do sign up for my free weekly newsletter of encouragement to writers at rachaelherron.com/write/
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Elle says
Hi Rachel,
Writing my memoir while listening to “How to Fast Draft Your Memoir “.l on repeat, while walking my dog.
It’s the best, hard thing I have ever done!
Thank you, Thank you
Your friend,
Linda
Rachael says
YES! I’m proud of you!